Time’s Lapse

This is my first post in over three months. It’s a long time to be away from writing, but I’m hoping to post at least weekly from now on. The idea came when as I sat drinking a cappuccino and thought, what if you bought a coffee on the way to work and when you got there. . . .  The idea is probably not very original, but it’s a place to start, and I enjoyed writing it.

coffeeRebecca dropped her two girls off at day care, picked up a cappuccino at the coffee shop and headed for the morgue.

I hate Mondays. She knew her hatred of Mondays stemmed from her hatred of weekends, because the previous weekend’s carnage on the roads always meant multiple corpses at the morgue on Monday.

She pulled into a reserved parking spot that bore her name: Rebecca Matthews. The spot to her left already occupied by an immaculately kept 1980 Mercedes 350 SE. It was large, clunky and thirsty but Sam Treloar, the city’s chief medical examiner, loved it. He’d inherited it when his father died and he looked after it as if it was his baby, much to the chagrin of his long-suffering wife.

Sam was already in the lab, the pile of notes next to him evidence of the toxicology tests he’d already carried out. He rubbed a hand wearily across his eyes. “Some days I hate this job,” he said violently, “the innocent are killed and the guilty walk away free.”

Rebecca pulled her lab coat on as she stood beside him. “Bad case Sam?”

He didn’t reply. Sometimes the job affected him so much she wondered why he hadn’t quit years ago.

“Morning Sam.” Their junior assistant exited the lift. Elijah looked dapper as usual.

“Looks like we have a bad one on our hands today, Elijah,” Rebecca told him.

Sam continued to sit motionless, responding to neither Elijah’s greeting nor Rebecca’s statement.

“Boss…you okay?”

There was no response.

“Boss?” Elijah put a hand on the older man’s shoulder.

The senior medical examiner looked up. “Come on, Elijah, the sooner you and I get this autopsy done the better.”

Elijah followed him to the other side of the room where a body lay on the autopsy table shrouded in a sheet.

“I hope the guy who caused this accident is locked up for a very long time. So high on ice, he didn’t even realise he’d been in a smash. And now…” Sam’s voice shook with emotion as he rested his hand gently on the shrouded head, “…two little girls will grow up without their mother.” he uncovered the body with great gentleness.

Elijah gasped, “Oh dear Lord, no!”

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Dear readers of The Pen and fellow bloggers, this will be my last post for some time. Exactly how long, I don’t know.

Last July, I had a fall and exacerbated a previous knee injury. This further caused problems to the severe osteoarthritis I already had in my right knee. In the last two or three weeks, it has been difficult to walk more than 20-25 feet without pain, and in the last week, after a series of x-rays it was discovered what little cartilage left on the right hand side of the knee has fragmented so the whole knee joint is now moving “bone on bone.” A total knee reconstruction is the only solution, but at the moment, that is not possible due to other medical conditions and being overweight.

The only relief from pain is morphine twice a day, and if you’ve ever taken morphine, you’ll know what that does for your imagination, creativity and concentration–I’ve even fallen asleep four times while trying to write this post. I can’t promise I’ll read your blog posts and comment while I’m away, and any chance of doing any editing of my current WIP just isn’t going to happen😦

Stay safe and well my friends❤


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Flights of Fantasy

The Cave Mistress over at The Scribe’s Cave, has given us a new prompt in her series of abandoned places. You have 50-200 words to write your story, poem or whatever you want to produce.  You can leave a link to your story in the cave  My story begins after the photo.

Japanese shrine
“Grandfather…what is happening to your arm?” Haruki asked, pointing wide-eyed as Taiga’s arm began to shimmer and morph. Small scales began to form and gradually grew larger until they covered his whole arm.

“Ahh, Haruki, you have discovered my secret.” Taiga chuckled and pulled his grandson into an embrace. “I had hoped to tell you on your birthday, but it seems the ancestors have other ideas.

Haruki watched as more and more scales appeared, and finally two huge wings sprouted on his grandfather’s back.

“Would you like to go flying with me?” Taiga’s eyes twinkled as he handed Haruki his jacket.

Haruki’s nodded excitedly.

Taiga lifted Haruki onto his back. “Hold tight now, we wouldn’t want you to fall into the ocean.”

Haruki laughed in delight as his grandfather ran and leapt into the night sky with effortless ease.


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Not Just any Tom, Dick or Harry Will Do

by warszawianka

What do you think of Gaylord Oglesby as a name?

Umm…depends on who he is.

He’s a serial killer in my book.

Gaylord? You’re kidding.

Yes, Gaylord, what’s wrong with Gaylord?

You’re going to call a serial killer Gaylord.

But no one would suspect him, would they?

I would. It’s no wonder he became a serial killer when his parents named him that.

Gaylord Oglesby

Osvaldo Beauchamp?


Osvaldo Beauchamp

Well, how about Lucius Grubb?

Hmmm…yeah, I like that.

Lucius Grubb it is then.

Ever had that conversation with a friend or fellow writer? A fellow writer will always understand your problem. A friend…well, they’re probably accustomed to your strange questions so they won’t be too surprised.

There are a few random name generators out there on the internet, but I’ve recently discovered two that I think are a cut above the rest.

The first one, Random Name Generator, allows you to choose common, average or rare names. You can pick from 10 to 100 names, male, female or both. Overall, it will generate over 480 million choices.

The second site, Writers’ Den  is more complex and gives you a character name generator, first line generator, character profile generator, or plot idea generator.

So, have play and let me know what you think.

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No Stock in Think So’s — J’Sharn’s World

Written for The Scribe’s Cave, a place where wondrous things dwell. Hike up the mountain — watch out for the yeti — and add your piece of flash fiction based on the photo prompt, which this week is the abandoned stock exchange in Belgium. You only need 50-200 words and the Cave Mistress will warmly welcome you. When you’ve written your story, add it to the link to share with others. Be sure to read the other stories too. You’ll find my contribution for this week after the photos.

Belgium BuildingAgent Matthews studied the photos. It was going to work—it had to. He’d been hunting them for seven months and every time he got close, they dropped off the radar. Someone was tipping them off.

The grey man turned from his view of the city. “You’re sure that’s where they are this time?”

“Our contact in the Belgian State Security believes so.”

“Believes so?” the grey man didn’t like ‘believes so’s,’ it was too much like ‘thinks so.’  “In other words, they don’t know.”

Matthews bristled, he didn’t like Nimrod Quinn—nobody liked Nimrod Quinn. No one ever called him Nimrod Quinn. Everyone thought of him as “the grey man.” Everything he wore was grey—even his skin looked grey. There was something about him, something that…

“Your team is ready to go in?” the grey man cut through his thoughts.

He acknowledged Quinn with a nod.

“Don’t disappoint me this time Agent Matthews.” The grey man’s tone held no threat. The grey man didn’t need to make threats.

“How hard can it be to catch a geriatric alien and a thirteen year old child?”  Matthews immediately wished he’d kept his thoughts to himself.

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This Too Shall Pass – Sunday Photo Fiction

Each Sunday, Al Forbes supplies a photo to inspire us to write a piece of fiction, a poem, or whatever you like up to around 200 words. If you’d like to join in, wander on over to Sunday Photo Fiction. Click on the little blue froggy thingy to leave a link to your post and then read what others have written. You’ll find my story this week  after the picture.

Car Wrecks september-27th-2015

“It’s all right, Gloria, love,” Sylvia patted her friend’s arm as she sobbed into her cup of tea, “men always have a mid-life crisis. Look at my Fred; he wanted to swim the channel when he turned fifty-five,” she chuckled, “didn’t take long to get that out of his system.”

Gloria reached for a tissue and wiped her nose. “Yes, but not before a whole lot of other things got into his system when he tried it and he ended up in hospital with diarrhea.”

“Well Lou isn’t likely to get diarrhea from driving around in an old banger is he, and besides, what sort of racing car will he get for two hundred quid.” Sylvia refilled both cups. “Let him have his bit of fun, no racing team will take him on at his age.” Sylvia rolled her eyes, “Can you imagine the insurance premiums?”

A truck groaned to a halt at the front of the house and they heard Lou’s excited voice coming down the hall.

“Gloria love, come and have a look at my new racer. It’s even got my name on it.” Lou looked like a five-year-old on Christmas morning and he urged the two women to the front door. “And look, Fred found one too. He’s going to be Hit Man. We’re the new kings of the race track.”

Gloria turned and headed back towards the kitchen. “Come on Sylvie love, I think we’re going to need something a bit stronger than tea.”

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The Tooth, the Whole Tooth, and Nothing but the Tooth – Scribe’s Cave

Written for The Scribe’s Cave, a place where fiction dwells. Hike up the mountain and add your piece of flash fiction based on the photo prompt. You only need 50-200 words and the Cave Mistress will warmly welcome you. When you’ve written your story, add it to the link to share with others. Be sure to read the other stories too. You’ll find my very late post for this week after the photos.

drink machine run down room

“Is he kidding?” Jack took in the dilapidated state of the apartment. “He wants two thousand a month for this?”

The real estate agent had the grace to blush slightly. “Mr Grandino has been busy; he hasn’t had a chance to clean it up since the last tenant left, but he promises to so within a month, and to keep the drink machine full at all times—free of charge. And he’s also going to put in a snack machine—also free of charge.”

Jack’s eyebrows did a disappearing trick into his hair as he realised the truth. “He’s in league with the drink manufacturers, isn’t he—puts a drink machine in every apartment and gets a cut of the profits, right?”

The estate agent ran a hand through his hair, “Ummm…no, not exactly.”

“What then…exactly?”

“He’s…he’s actually in league with his brother. He’s a dentist.”

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